Sunday, 11 October 2009
William's Homework
Nowdays,the world is becoming a village with the integration of global economy and mutual mergence of culture.It is very convenient and easy for people to travel around the world.Some people have a trip for shopping ,some want to visit the place of historical interest.In my view,traveling can broadens people's mind,lots of people wants to spend their holiday on traveling around the world to help themselves broaden their mind.Actually,i believe traveling can take lots of benefits to people.For instance,you can visit lots of the famous places in the world,and touch the different cultures in different countries.In my essay,i want to discuss about the how can traveling help people broaden the mind and give some personal ideas about traveling.
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Nowdays,/p/the world is becoming a village with the integration of global economy and /mutual mergence/?/ of culture./p/It is very convenient and easy for people to travel around the world.Some people have a trip for shopping ,some want to visit /the place/gr/ of historical interest.In my view,traveling can broadens /gr/ people's mind,lots of people wants /gr/ to spend their holiday on /pr/ traveling around the world to help themselves broaden their mind.Actually,i /p/ believe traveling can take /v/ lots of benefits to people.For instance,you can visit lots of the famous places in the world,and touch the different cultures in different countries.In my essay,i want to discuss about /p/ the how can traveling help people broaden the mind and give some personal ideas about traveling.
ReplyDelete/What personal ideas do you want to give? What structure will you essay take? You mentioned some ideas as way of background, but didn't indicate how they are going to fit together? What's your thesis?
Careful with simple things like punctuation. Apart from that, good./