Topic: More and more parents send their children abroad to receive secondary education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad for teenage students.
A. Introduction
1. general idea
i. advantages & disadvantages
2. my own opinion, support
3. overview of structure of essay
B.Main body
1. advantages
a) shorten process of learning English
b) young person immerses in different culture more easily than adults, ways of living and thinking
c) learn career benefits early
i. a cosmopolitan,international perspective
ii. self-sufficient, independent, cope work, organized, innovative
iii. future networking
2. disadvantages
a) teenagers are not mature enough to tare care of themselves
advice for parents:try to detect and foster children's ability of independence early
b) expensive
advice for parents:don't be blind.make sure you can afford.
C. Conclusion
1. summary: studying abroad benefits teenage students
2. make a appropriate decision.make preparations.
Good. The introduction section lacks much content though.
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