Sunday, 11 October 2009

claire's homework

The rapid development of electronic communications may mean that people will have social skills. Discuss

It is undeniable and inevitable that electronic facilities and devices bring us huge benefits in various aspects admittedly .However, those high-technology communications still can produce some negative effects to people’s social skills. Every year, some new electric innovations were created to instead or save some labor and less time consuming. Gradually, some traditional and classic social skills began disappeared even extinct. In this essay, I will discuss the demerits that electronic communications caused in our modern society.

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  1. The rapid development of electronic communications may mean that people will have /?/ social skills. Discuss

    It is undeniable and inevitable that electronic facilities and devices bring us huge benefits in various aspects admittedly .However, those high-technology communications still can produce some negative effects to /on/ people’s social skills. Every year, some new electric innovations were created to instead /v/ or save some labor and /less time consuming/?/. Gradually, some traditional and classic social skills /began disappeared/gr/ even /^/ extinct. In this essay, I will discuss the demerits that electronic communications caused /gr/ in our modern society.

    /Good, but it doesn't make clear what the structure of your argument is going to be. No definitions either./

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