Sunday, 18 October 2009

Lanfang's homework

Shopping on line


A. Introduction

a) general idea
advantages & disadvantages
b) my own opinion
---meet sb’s needs
---need more regulations

B. Main body

a) Paragraph 2
what & how
---what to buy (figures, my own experience)
---how to buy (websites)
b) Paragraph 3
why don’t like it
---cheating information
---quality unchecked
---unsafe (privacy, bank account)
c) Paragraph 4
still lots of people love it
--- save money (e-business costs less)
--- save time (wide choice, delivered)

C. Conclusion

a) Science development benefits us
b) More regulations are needed to protect consumers

1 comment:

  1. Good. Could do with a bit more content to some parts.

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