claire's homework

Writing plan
Topic: with the development of technology, machine of producing foods became multi-functional. There is a growing tendency nowadays that many food manufactures put additives, and even some harmful Pesticides when they planting the farms .discuss this phenomenon and express your ideas.

1. introduction:
The reports that whether food additive and pesticides should be controlled or eliminated were been the argument by many aspects of society. In this essay, I will discuss the influence that those chemical additives made and point out my opinion in the following.

2. Main idea:
Support: those chemical may accelerate the speed of it’s grow. However, they may also mutate the chemical make-up of the plant nets in order to pollute environment.

Variation: in another words, those technology may influence the environment indirectly. Gradually, many negative consequences like no more clean farmlands to plant crops will appears in the future.

Support: examples: some particular chemical will exists in the soil last for more than hundred years, which means that piece of lands was poisoned and dead.

3. Next main idea
Support: foods additives may influence even broken the system of our body. Because not only nutrition of food will be damaged, but also produce some harmful elements to our health.
Variation: food additives were widely used by many food factories in order to reduce the cost and increase the profit. While others contend that negative impacts will also ensue on human health and on local communities.

Support: example: a recent report about the food poison accident in china, which contributed by the food additives form a illegal manufacture.

4. Conclusion: Foods additives should be eliminated under the pressure from government and health agencies.

Reference:
http://news.xinhuanet.com/english/2009-09/24/content_12107825.htm
http://www.made-in-china.com/Agriculture-Food-Catalog/Food-Additive.html