Sunday, 18 October 2009

william's plan

Traveling broadens the mind

Introduction

Describe the situation about traveling in the world

Give out the background of the topic

Indicate personal ideas

Sign spot

Main ideas

The reasons why people like traveling

Different kinds of traveling

Advantages of traveling

How can traveling help people broaden the mind

Next main ideas

My personal view of traveling. eg.people should have a plan before traveling

Some individual suggestions of traveling eg.prepare for traveling

ConclusionSum up the essay, Repeat the main points of the essay

1 comment:

  1. This doesn't tell me anything about what you are going to say. E.g. 'ConclusionSum up the essay, Repeat the main points of the essay' - what are the main points?

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