Friday, 30 October 2009

CLAIRE'S HOMEWORK

Reference: http://translate.google.com/translate?hl=zh-CN&sl=en&tl=zh-CN&u=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.worldwildlife.org%2Fspecies%2F&anno=2

Summary:
We can protect wild animals from many aspects. Reducing the conflicts between human and wild animals can be one of the most important things which depends on the sustainable environment development. There are also many main factors to notice and take care according to the author. Firstly, we should use lands reasonable to ensure animals have enough places to live. Payment to environment service and the fee to animal insurance (pay money to establish park or other activities to protect wild animals) .Meanwhile, the wild animal products should be eliminated. Also, make good management to the field to prevent animals enter resident’s field is essential.

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  1. We can protect wild animals from many aspects/v/. Reducing the conflicts between human and wild animals can be one of the most important things which depends on the sustainable environment development. There are also many main factors to notice and take care /pr/ according to the author. Firstly, we should use lands reasonable/gr/ to ensure animals have enough places to live. /Payment to environment service and the fee to animal insurance/g/ (pay money to establish park or other activities to protect wild animals) .Meanwhile, the/a/ wild animal products should be eliminated. Also, /make good management/g/ to the field to prevent animals enter/g/ resident’s/g/ field is essential.

    /The grammar is not good enough. It's not clear if some of these points are your or the author's./

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