Sunday, 11 October 2009

Rie's homework

〈The rapid development of electronic communications may mean that people will have fewer social skills. Discuss.〉

The effect of technology on our society have been expanding over
the last twenty years. Our life was changed and improved rapidly
by especially the Internet and a mobile phone. These tools make
us be able to communicate with others whenever you want, and
wherever you are. In addition, they generated new types of
communication ways such as an E-mail, writing a blog, chatting
on the Internet, and so on. Some people are afraid that people
may lack social skills because they can communicate without
meeting friends or customers by using them. However, people
need to adapt to each communication styles, then they have to
get more social skills now than twenty years ago. This essay will
mention advantages and disadvantages of electronic
communication, and why the kinds of social skills have been
increased.

1 comment:

  1. The effect of technology on our society have /gr/ been expanding over the last twenty years. Our life was changed and improved rapidly by /^/ especially the Internet and a /a/ mobile phone. These tools make us /be/ able to communicate with others whenever /you/ want, and wherever /you/ are. In addition, they generated new types of communication /ways/ such as /an/ E-mail, writing /a/ blog, chatting on the Internet, and so on. Some people are afraid that people may /^/ lack social skills because they can communicate without meeting friends or customers by using /them/. However, people need to adapt to each communication style/s/, /then/v/ they have to /get/v/ more social skills now than twenty years ago. This essay will mention /a/ advantages and disadvantages of electronic communication, and why the kinds of social skills have /been/?/ increased.

    /Good. Be careful with preposotions and pronouns./

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