Sunday, 11 October 2009

Nicole's home work

Academic study is one of the most important parts of education. People have different aims for

undertaking academic study. They normally include personal purpose and social intention.

Meanwhile, people also need to find the effective ways to achieve them. This essay will first talk

about different aims of academic study. It will be divided into two parts. Firstly, personal

purpose will explain the aims which involved the people who want to develop and improve their

personal growth. Secondly, social intention will explain the people who have career need. And

then, the essay will discuss about the ways to achieve them.

1 comment:

  1. Academic study is one of the most important parts of education /sounds tautologous/. People have different aims for undertaking academic study. They normally include personal purpose and social intention /needs defining/. Meanwhile, people also need to find the effective ways to achieve them. This essay will first talk about different aims of academic study. It will be divided into two parts. Firstly, /^/ personal purpose will explain the aims which /^/ involved the people who want to develop and improve their personal growth. Secondly, /^/ social intention will explain /^/ the people who have career need. And then, the essay will discuss about the ways to achieve them.

    /Very good. But you need to say what your thesis is, and define your terms (plus you need to be more careful about sentence structure)./

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