Monday, 12 October 2009

Jessica's homework

(travelling broaden the mind,discuss)
The increasing people are attracted to tourism,which show that there must be many attractive aspect of tourism.It is generally accepted that travelling can make us relaxed and get away from the pressure,but whethere travelling can broaden our mind is a topic worthy of discussion.From my point of view,travelling to a new place can give us riched experences and other benefits,but again whether these benefits can help us broaden our mind depende on individual ability.The following content is the the views of the positive and negative side i have collected.

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  1. /The increasing people/gr/ are attracted to tourism,/p/which show /gr/ that there must be many attractive aspect of tourism./p/It is generally accepted that travelling can make us relaxed and /get/v/ /^/ away from the /a/ pressure,but whethere /sp/ travelling can broaden our mind is a topic worthy of discussion.From my point of view,travelling to a new place can give us riched /sp/ experences /sp/ and other benefits,but again whether these benefits can help us broaden our mind depende /sp/ on individual ability.The following content /v/ is the / the views of the positive and negative side i /p/ have collected.

    /What's your thesis and what's your structure? Too many simple errors./

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