1. Linett Carlsson pointed out that the earth is facing a continuous increasing extinction that goes far beyond the normal extinction rate.
2. Today’s extinction is happening approximately a hundred to thousand times faster than before which said by Botkin & Keller (2007).( main reason: industrialization and overexploiting of natural resources)
3. Some of animals were abandoned and send into zoo, which kill their nature and negative to their life
4. Animals may behavior quite abnormal if the get rid of nature and locked in the cave. The animals in the zoos should be fed in nature ways.
5. A combination of several different kinds of environmental enrichment has been
Proved to be the most successful way to reduce abnormal behavior.
Reference:
http://mdh.diva-portal.org/smash/record.jsf?pid=diva2:232780
Topic
A recent report shows the statistic of wild animals decreasing dramatically while the illegal hunters keep killing wild animals to gain profits. Discuss the influence that this phenomenon will bring and illustrate the solution.
The protection of wild animals seems not enough, which can tell form the report that the sort of extinct animals growing yearly. The hunters and some businessman try to get profits from precious animals though sell them or use their organ and skin to make products. How can we solve this question? If we ignore this problem, what consequence will happen in future?
(Inserting some figures to prove this problem became generally over the global.)
Living environment:
The balance of food chain could be broken, which would threaten the life of human beings.
Immoral
People may feel numb and careless about it if we keep killing wild animals.
Thesis: bad influence to human’s culture and our next generation
Government:
1. Improve legal system by issuing some relevant laws and regulations for prevention
(Government)
2. Launch the toughest punishments on the frequent law-breakers
(for example: fine huge amount of money/ go to the prison)
Personal:
1. Establish some festivals or anniversaries to remind people of the importance of protecting wild animals
2. do some voluntary work( example: persuade people don’t buy fur any more)
Conclusion
The base of protecting wild animals should start from improve people’ consciousness of protecting environment
Good. The thesis could be clearer, and the argument more focussed - I don't see how the conclusion follows from what you said. You should try to introduce and opposing point of view and say why it's wrong. You shouldn't be using full sentences in notes and plans. 'Influence' in the title should be 'effect'.
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