Jessica's Homework

Ø Introduction

1. background of employment difficulty for graduates

2. this essay will explore the main reason for it

3. in the process,the essay will show the previous opinion is not main cause through some evidence,then explore a main reason from a new perspective and compare with Hongkong to find the other reason

Ø Main body Ⅰ

1. describe the situation about it and show the imprtance to solve

2. prove the previous opinion is wrong with fact and data

3. keeping this opinion will waste amount of resouse

Ø Main body Ⅱ

1. the main reason is low job supply

2. low supply’s reason is the problem of industrial chain

3. example related to America

Ø Main body Ⅲ

1. the background of high exployment rate in Hongkong

2. compare with Hongkong to find the reason

Ø Conclusion and recommendation

1. the main reason is low job supply

2. recommendation for efficitive using of government resource ,and solve the issue of employment difficulty fundamentally