Tuesday, 2 February 2010

JIN's essay plan

1. Introduction
Background of this argument / General idea / definitions
2. Negative opinions about this argument
High pressure leads to low creativity (e.g. high pressure makes people too busy)
High consumption of energy leads to pollution
Increasing population leads to resource scarcity
Analyzing data to explain information above
3. Positive opinions for this argument
Increasing population doesn’t really make a extreme situation (e.g. fast growth of China)
Pollution puts a positive pressure on countries (e.g. development of new energy)
Scarcity of resource awakes people’s awareness to protect environment (e.g. Plants protecting Law in UK)
4. Look at a society, describe the growth in a general way, and try to find out the correlation between advance of society and pressure.
5. To summarize the main support ideas and try to make a conclusion.

1 comment:

  1. 'Background of this argument / General idea / definitions' - what argument? Needs more content

    'To summarize the main support ideas and try to make a conclusion.' - as above.

    Rest ooks good. How about references? Title?

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