Jin' s Homework

Essay Plan

1. Introduction
1.1 Background of this argument
A few people think high pressure prevents the development of society. However others support that pressure accelerate the development of society.

1.2 Definition
Definition of pressure: Kinds of pressures on a society, unemployment, population, resource……

1.3 Thesis
It's definite that pressure could accelerate the pace of social advance.

2. Negative opinions about this argument
High pressure leads to low creativity (e.g. high pressure makes people too busy)
High consumption of energy leads to pollution
Increasing population leads to resource scarcity
Analyzing data to explain information above

3. Positive opinions for this argument
Increasing population doesn’t really make an extreme situation (e.g. fast growth of China)
Pollution puts a positive pressure on countries (e.g. development of new energy)
Scarcity of resource awakes people’s awareness to protect environment (e.g. Plants protecting Law in UK)

4. Look at ( society ) , describe the growth in a general way, and try to find out the correlation between advance of society and pressure.

5. To summarize the main support ideas and try to make a conclusion