William's 2rd paragraph

In china,we have the film censorship system,which means film need to be checked before been showed in cinema.Some films need to cut part of plots or change some part of the story,only after everything had been changed,the film can be showed to the audience.Unfortunately,some film will not allow to show in cinema becasue the specific plots.Others need to edit a lot of the plot.All these sometimes make the film hard to understand and divide the film to small parts,audiences can't connect the plot together.It will make them feel confused.In addition,directors always think about this system before and when they are shooting the film,this gives a restriction to director.They need to change their mind to make everything right.Even though,some directors learn to cut the film by theirselves before they send the film to the censorship system.It sounds funny,but it's the truth.As all mentioned above,the film censorship system had changed the china's film market a lot also change some directors a lot.Directors need freedom to shoot,audiences need to see the whole story without cutting.